Below is my peer review for my classmate, Cheyenne. I really liked her project, and I think her topic is something that's extremely important.
Her final project can be viewed here.
For Cheyenne's project I decided to make a copy-editing suggestion based on some of her design elements.
For Cheyenne's project I think that the biggest complaint that I had was that some of her video clips were super quiet. I just advised that she try to make them louder because that will make it easier for the viewer to watch.
I also mentioned the genre convention of music in the video. Although Cheyenne's topic is a solemn one, I think when she shows some of the media that doesn't have audio, it would be more easy to look at if she had soft music playing.
One thing I loved about Cheyenne's project was that you could tell that it's a topic she's super passionate about. This really comes through when she talks during the video and I think that that makes her argument much more effective.
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